this is the first draft of our final piece. it is a performance shot from our second day of filming which we did in the recording studio intersected with other footage we have just to determine cuts and how they blend. the final product will not feature this shots so heavily but instead these shots will intersect the rest of the music video.
to improve:
- the dark shots are very grainy. this needs to be fixed if the shots are long, however in quick succession we can probably get away with it
- the colour shots need to have some kind of filter on them to improve the colour: the saturation is very high
- we need more footage to be the base of the video rather than performance
